I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 2 and my teacher is Ellen. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora my name is Breeze and I go to Kaikohe West. I like that you put punctuation in your work I really like that you and your friend are smiling. Maybe you can put more infomation and I like that you put lot's of work that you have done. You did a great poster with intresting words in your writting.
Kia Ora my name is Kireesha from Kaikohe West school and I liked the way you edited your photo and your best friend next to you. The flowers are really good on your edit but next time can you give me a little bit more info about what you were learning about please.
Kia ora my name is Breeze and I go to Kaikohe West. I like that you put punctuation in your work I really like that you and your friend are smiling. Maybe you can put more infomation and I like that you put lot's of work that you have done. You did a great poster with intresting words in your writting.
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ReplyDeletekia ora my name is keith and i like your photo with your friend and the cake
ReplyDeleteHi Gabby,
ReplyDeleteI like the photo of you and your class mate and all the decorations around it!
Nice
Iris
what is this gabby ha
ReplyDeletei like the cake around you and ya
ReplyDeleteKia Ora my name is Kireesha from Kaikohe West school and I liked the way you edited your photo and your best friend next to you. The flowers are really good on your edit but next time can you give me a little bit more info about what you were learning about please.
ReplyDeletei like how you did a friendship photo.
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